An opportunistic element, water
Flowing down as it’s easy
And rising is so very hard
We are mesmerized by waterfalls
Trickles, rivulets, cascades of
Water as it does what is natural
Creating an orchestra of sound
A choreography of movement
A wavering veil of misting touch
The stillness of breathing suspended
While witnesses gasp, seduced by
The fall of water from heights
Too steep to climb, too severe
To ascend, pooling at the top
From rain, run off, other streams
Clearest, purest, secreting
The inevitable creed that
Water being shrewd and lazy
Takes the easy way down
Falling in sheets of splendor
Stopping hearts, holding tongues
While the moon remains
We too, we two, hiked up
The mountain’s well trod path
Believing we were the first and then
The only to hike the sheer face
Of our newness to each other
We tried roles in strange frontiers
I, fearless, you, omniscient
Creasing the masks until they fit
A symphony of universe
Dancing among boulders
Water dripping from our hands
Until wind buffeted the shells of
Our bodies and we lost balance
I fell against you, you against me
But we could not hold each other
As we could not hold ourselves
We fell like water, friends turning away
Who could watch the broken treaty
While we did what was easy
Opportunists, we toppled down
Hearts tangled amongst the limbs
While the moon remained
Sound of words we pledged
Silent echoes between our gasps
Around laces that bind our mouths
Once more we stand, shaken
Lift knees and bend hips
Scrabble among rocks and broken bones
Tears on your cheeks you reach up
I clasp your hand, pull your weight
We speak the same words, a new order
This current climb, conscious
Careful to see each footfall
To sense each word and to grasp
Not only sound but meaning
To see each with the other’s eyes
Because I do not have to feel
Every ache in this world to know
Each hurt pulsing in yours
And you do not need every sound
To hear the heart of my hunger
Now we stand atop the hill
Watching as water falls but we don’t
Still the moon remains
Waterfall image courtesy: public-domain-image.com
Comments on: "A Fall of Water" (19)
Lovely. And I love the sound of water.
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Me too. I keep drawing plans for a fountain in our yard. One day….
Thank you for the kind comment.
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Wowza! Incredible! LOVE IT!
The cascade of relationships . .. Sometimes landing together in pristine pools . . . sometimes bouncing off the rocks . . .
I like to think that the vaporization on the way down is perhaps the stuff of what our souls are made of.
POWERFUL Shari.
Methinks you should publish your poems.
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Judy, I like that thought – the vaporization is our souls – perhaps. Thank you for the lovely comment.
It’s unlikely I’ll ever pub my poems, but I’m pleased to let readers view them here and hopefully enjoy them as well.
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I heard the falls as I read this.
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What a sweet comment to make. Thank you, Robert.
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It’s true. Good poetry does that…:)
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❤
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Reblogged this on Art by Rob Goldstein and commented:
Every line of this poem is a delight.
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I’m deeply moved by seeing my poem on your blog – thank you for sharing your space and for the kind comment.
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Very artful. Excellent post. Thanks for sharing!
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Great imaginary for the sound of water. I felt the calm sensation as I read it as if I was at a waterfall with beautiful surroundings. Much love.
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Thank you, Izrael, I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem. Be well.
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I am so unaccustomed to see you write poetry. Lovely write.
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I’ve never considered myself a poet. My college stuff was such an embarrassment to the typewriter that the machine frequently responded to the stress by boggling up the tape. (Yes, pre-computer)
But the last four or five years I often find only a poem can express what I’m feeling. I write sporadically, sometimes taking 2 – 3 years to get a poem to say what I want. This one took a week, and that was only for the last stanza.
You’re a poet – you know, sometimes they come, and sometimes they don’t.
Thank you for the kind comment. From you, this means a lot to me.
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Because I do not have to feel
Every ache in this world to know
Each hurt pulsing in yours
And you do not need every sound
To hear the heart of my hunger
Shari, these are some intense feelings I have after reading your words, specifically the ones above. To know one another this well. Cling to it, I say. Lovely.
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Thank you, Audrey, it’s a great feeling to know my words resonate with you.
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This is beautiful–and so bittersweet. I love the waterfall as a metaphor for a relationship. 🙂
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Thank you, Cathleen, I’m glad you enjoyed this one.
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