An old barn is a bane to a farmer but a boon to an artist
A dilapidated shack an eyesore for neighbors but refuge for the poor
A ruined mortal a quarry for accusers but forage for the poet
No matter the cunning snake that wallows in his deceit,
no matter the smirking ghoul who destroys a career,
the gossip who barters a confidence like cheap candy,
or the trusted friend for whom betrayal is a conquest
Even the repentant face in my mirror seeks amends
We hold a dance in the old barn for the lovelorn,
pretending we are not the target of the fiddle’s song
We thrust our hand into the poor box, denying our hunger
for the taste of human comfort, of slaking the thirst for touch
We witness the breaking of bonds, the loss of redemption
No matter the ink dripping red and thick as blood,
beating a drum’s dirge so close to the heart
The heat of fever spreads across the dampened cloth
Here in the shack lit by the flame within my marrow,
nerve endings steal my breath, fright scores my flesh
All the sorrows of life and demise, of hope and regret
Just this side of one being’s view of all’s fair,
another’s sight of conflict shrieking grievance,
each begging for sympathy and a sacred verse
To me, the ash heap of sorrow and confession,
Remains the mewling rasp of story, and I will tell it
Just a thought 43
Old barn photo courtesy Pixabay
Comments on: "I Will Tell" (29)
I love free verse poetry. This was lovely, Shari.
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Thank you, Glynis. I enjoy writing it and spend many hours making certain I say exactly what I want to express.
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Those used up visuals are some of my favorites. Your poetry is stunning. Thank you
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Coming from you, your compliment means a great deal to me. I enjoy being submerged in the process of writing poetry that appears to gush without restraint.
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Thought-provoking and full of imagery. Very nice.
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I’d been looking at our photos of old barns we’d taken years ago (not the one in the post, however) and thinking how we regard places and the people who once lived there. Over days, my thoughts expanded. Thank you for your comment, Carrie.
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Beautifully and well said. You paint deep pictures with words. I was particularly struck by the fiddle’s song–so often we deny we’re the target as we deny our own needs.
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Jenna, you always catch the deeper meaning of my poems. Thanks for reading.
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All that inspired by the old barn? Incredible imagery your words invoke, Shari!
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Yes – However, I started this poem more than a year ago. It grew. Most of my poetry begins with a single thought that develops over time.
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Please gush without restraint more often. Your poetry is soul nurturing for us all who have the pleasure of reading it.
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Thanks, Judy. You made my day a happy one.
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“… No matter the ink dripping red and thick as blood, beating a drum’s dirge so close to the heart…” this along with last line especially sends shivers of delight! am reminded of how beauty is always within tragedy…
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And that we would never appreciate paradise if it weren’t for hell being so close behind.
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Rich in imagery and meaning! This is multi-layered and thought provoking, Sharon. Enjoyed very much!
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Thank you so much, Betty. I love your comments.
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😊❤️
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Wow! Shari, an incredible poem, powerful and thought-provoking. Seeing the title and image I was going to happily join you in my love for old dilapidated barns – I see your imagination and creativity took you to a place way beyond barns! The writing is raw, striking into one’s heart and finishes with the superb ”Remains the mewling rasp of story, and I will tell it”. This is just the start, I feel … wanting more.
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You’re right, Annika. It’s just the start. The stories are the rest.
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With each line I read I nodded my head in agreement. I sighed with relief when I read the last line. I’m waiting to read the story you tell.
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Thank you, Irene – still working on querying agents.
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Exquisite poetry, Shari! I read this twice and have a feeling I’m going to want to read it more often in the future. It’s deep and thoughtful, I can feel the hours you spent writing it in its intensity. Going to print it out and keep it in my journal. ❤
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Your comment is a high honor, Sarah. Thank you very much.
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What a beauty, Sharon, so visual and deep in its meaning. I love how this began a while ago and grew into such a stunning poem.
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You obviously read all the comments as well as the poem – that’s admirable endurance, Lauren. I’m glad you took away something meaningful to you.
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A profound and interesting write. From the outset when you set it up with the one man’s garbage is another man’s treasure you set the tone. Love when you do poetry Shari.
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I think great stories come from facing our human failures and discovering why we stumble on the way to trying to do good. Think of almost any great story and it is probably about someone who’s committed egregious mistakes.
Thank you for supporting my poetry, Andrew.
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That is also where our heroes come from.
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You are absolutely right, Andrew.
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